Peer Comments

After taking a good look at all the comments that were given by our peers it became clear that we needed some form of performance to re-create a strong indie/electro vibe. Simple shots such as lip syncing could improve our videos standard. We understood that we needed variation of characters and more introductions to the characters we did have. Some comments were unclear and rather irrelevant such as the concept that our video was too public. According to our peers we also needed more props, such as alcohol.
We also had pointers that advised us to erase and get rid of the starting shots of the video, because our starting shots were carried out in the college grounds. Unlike our idea of doing this filming in a home we used the environment we had at the time.
So with that said we feel we most definitely need to emphasis and re-create a new fresh start to the music video.
However as a total outcome we had positive feedback through out the comments, the peers expressed their thoughts about our filming techniques and added effects. I.e: slow motion, blur,rewind...