After looking at the comments we were given we feel that we had mostly positive feedback, a mixture of comments lead us to believe that we had almost made a success with our project even if we do feel we could have done more.
Peers understood some intertextual references we tried to represent Ie: drug taking with modern electronic music. Also with the stereotypical view of men seeing women as sexual objects. ( This was represented in two shots, one when the main character tries to reach out to two women, and once he is at a shop window.)
The criticism's given made perfect sense and we understood what they meant, such as not enough lip syncing.
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